What You Are To Me Poem by Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh

What You Are To Me

Rating: 3.3


You are an island in my sea of sorrow.
Baby if you leave me now where shall I go?

My life is like a desert
You are its oasis.
Please let me live in your heart
You are my only bliss.

My life is like winter nights
You are warm clothes to me.
My life is like bitter fights
You are my harmony.

My life is like rainy days
You are like my shelter.
My life is like zigzag ways
You are like my sports car.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 01 June 2012

There's good comparison and complementary in your poem but the last one left me laugh my friend hahaha zig zag road and sport car hahahaha....sorry it's funny but the poem is really nice! _Unwritten Soul

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Asif Andalib

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Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh
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