When Poem by David Wood

When

Rating: 3.8


When
I write
Languid lines
That fills this page
That weaves this new plot
Of loves labours
Or past loves
It is
Joy.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A doodle I did intend, not to drive you round the bend. A lighter look at the poets mind is something I've yet to find.

(A doodle on syllables)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valerie Dohren 10 May 2013

Short and sweet, the poet's treat.

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Diane Hine 09 May 2013

A delightful doodle.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 08 May 2013

languid lines are weight less like a soul it doodles initially but later after it pervades feeling like connected with heaven I think so......past is always with us it gives the bump thanks a lot

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Babatunde Aremu 08 May 2013

Such languid lines are emotional and nostalgic. Great poem, keep writing

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Gajanan Mishra 08 May 2013

loves labor, good love. thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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