When Birthday Comes Comments

Wow, so well thought and written, I liked the comments and commentary written by my learned friend Daniel.....Nothing to write after that.10+++

It is so lovely to remember the Birthday from the father's (parents') words! Nice work!

Wonderful poem, I love how you use natures season's to mark the passage life through birth and birthdays.

This poem begins in late autumn which is already early winter but it ends with an image of spring, but time has not raced forward to the season of flowers. You are still in your birthday season of autumn; it is your thoughts that have raced into spring, as you remember your beloved father's tenderness in giving you a sweet name that expressed his joy in having you and giving you forever the gift of hope preserved in your name This poem is so wonderful, it is so heartfelt. Love criss-crosses time and threads together father and daughter; what is lost is found again every birthday; your father is as close to you as the sound of a voice saying your name.