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When Depression Owns The Heart.........

Rating: 5.0
.......It's a depression so deep it finds a way into the Soul,
traveling through every pore of your Heart.

A depression so enlarged, it encompasses every bit
of your Reality,
leaving that Reality, a mere cloudy memory.

A depression so dense, it compresses every will
you once had,
bowing you down to accept that will, as it's own.

A depression so devious it takes you piece by piece,
consuming, each piece,

day by day.
A depression so truly disheartening,

it Leaves You,
with no other emotions.

A depression so dangerous,
it slaughters,


Of You.
Wednesday, June 21, 2006
Abby Stringer 03 October 2018
This has been countless people's struggles. writing helps. keep writing and keep helping
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calei 04 June 2018
it is a deep and meaningful poem, maybe just fix a few things in the way you write it, don't change everything just a couple of things. like with devious it takes you piece by piece, consuming, each piece try and use a different word that means the same thing because it just sounds a little off having the word piece bunched together like that. but that is my opinion :)) overall it is a very beautiful poem. and I hope you will write more! :))
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elouise 21 January 2018
this is a beautiful poem. the way it reads, is just how I write and think. x
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there but gone lonely 1 18 November 2017
wow its so true I feel this right now every bit of it my bf some one save me
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J. R. 04 October 2008
I'd like to add to this by adding that depression is not a feeling, it just is and once its there it dominates everything else.
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Angie Melby 27 May 2008
dang intense but very good it kinda fits with me today you know your really good man
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Shane Clawson 19 February 2008
Darrel, I tried to take my life not so long ago and I hope you are battling the demons of depression and that you are not alone. Thanx.
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Viola Jaynes 01 January 2008
Only a person who has experienced such a depression can meaningfully write about it. Very wonderful done, Darrel!
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Rebellious Jay 16 December 2007
Boy.. at one point or another i can say we have probably all suffered from depression. Your details are accurate. I like how it flows as though regular conversation.. the sound of the Y (as in E) is used throughout... i dunno if that was intentional but it was cool GOOD JOB!
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Josi Fregoso 05 June 2007
This poem is amazing. I love the way you describe the feeling of depression so accurately (ex. 'dense', 'devious', 'disheartening') . I'm impressed! Beautiful poem Darrel.
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