When Everything Is Right Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

When Everything Is Right

Rating: 5.0

I am the head,
the uppermost extremity
of the body,
where the brain sits
that has the capacity
to doubt and judge.

No matter how hard life gets,
everything has a way out,
for I am the seat
of the intellect
that aids one to select and correct.

I am the heart:
the core of one's being.
It symbolizes love
and binds everybody
into complete unity.

Everyone follows the heart:
where all dreams,
desires and passions live.
It is where true happiness
fully reigns.

I am the body,
Head or Heart, Heart or Head,
you are parts of my totality.
No one should be above the other,
for you complete my personality.

The head must advise the heart.
The heart must inspire the head.
When it is time to decide,
we must adhere to what is right.

But I have this inner struggle,
it is a clash between
what you know
and what you feel.

I am in love.
Shall I follow
the dictates of my head
or shall I accede
to the beats of my heart?

I am completely lost.
All I know,
everything is right
when you are in love.

Copyright 2024, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 17 April 2024

HOW was it possible that I had not discover this gem, this Masterpiece of the great Poetess? !

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Kim Barney 17 April 2024

Many things COULD be wrong, but everything FEELS right when you are in love! Very good poem, Rose Marie.

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Bri Edwards 17 April 2024

oK, i'M back WITH more! ! I think that your brain thinks 'love' and THAT causes your heartbeat to increase. It happens to most females when they know me (or just see me) . : ))))

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Bri Edwards 17 April 2024

Ok, not 'lastly'. ;)) I was seeking the poem from the BOTTOM of your 'HITs'-listed poems. OK, this may be at the bottom due only to its short time displayed on PH. Yes, that MUST be the case. Do you have some OLD ones no one has commented on?

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Bri Edwards 17 April 2024

Lastly: But it's a nicely-done poem, Rose Marie. : ) bri

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Sylvia Frances Chan 18 April 2024

LAST BUT NOT THE LEAST: My grandest applause for this magnificent philosophical final, most deserving as The Poem Of The Day. This is an excellent Masterpiece!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 18 April 2024

THREE: The biggest surprise is it comes down to the subject of LOVE and then the concluding verse I am completely lost. All I know everything is good when you are in love. So very very true! My deepest respect for this brilliant and precious philosophical poem

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Sylvia Frances Chan 18 April 2024

TWO: for the entire poem The great poetess has put it all in an excellent order, I can follow her brilliant logic it is very interesting to follow her thoughts for it is from the vein of all things and then to the emotional points vein

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Sylvia Frances Chan 18 April 2024

ONE: I repeat for my correct comment the last verse: I am completely lost. All I know everything is good when you are in love. This is according to my inside heart the correct answer

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Sylvia Frances Chan 17 April 2024

First of all, after having read this magnificent poem, I give this amazing creation 5 Stars Full

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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