When Hope Was Green Poem by Barry Middleton

When Hope Was Green

Rating: 5.0


with hope the spring anticipates
the world was a road to everywhere

I basked in the glow of a sunny day
composing songs to change the world

I stayed until the darkness fell
the western sky in streaks of gray

the muted shadows lost their hue
and melody became a dirge

and still the road leads on to roads
as seasons pass like setting suns

and poets pen their winsome lines
within the rhythms of their breath

When Hope Was Green
Friday, December 23, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: aging,hope,poetry
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nosheen Irfan 26 December 2016

Awesome write. With the passing years, hope loses its color. Youthful energy is replaced by inertia of body n soul. A huge 10.

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Barry Middleton 26 December 2016

That's it but poets are lucky as we still have our poetry even as we grow old. Thanks.

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Paul Brookes 23 December 2016

Beautifully penned from hope to enuii

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Barry Middleton 23 December 2016

Thanks Paul but I think despair or sadness more than ennui. Getting old and illness can really do a job on hope.

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