Friday, November 14, 2025

When I Close My Eyes I See Comments

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Sometimes,
A day's hustle bustle and demands of others
Weigh down on me
Draining out my energy
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Bharati Nayak
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Nabakishore Dash 16 November 2025

God is gracious and also omniscient.Even if u don't seek His blessings, he showers what is due to us in the right moment. Nicely written poem with great attitude mam.

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Isadora Quagmire 14 November 2025

Thank you for sharing! ! !

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Isadora Quagmire 14 November 2025

Lovely poem, Mrs. Nayak! ! ! I do the same thing too at the end of a long day : ) Well expressed! ! !

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Timber Koleden 14 November 2025

A very well expressed piece that accurately exposes a tiring day to be what it precisely is! Great imagery employed too! Thank you for sharing another fine poem!

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