Friday, November 15, 2013

When Inside God Dies Comments

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When inside God dies, we bury into our heart’
We gather more hope and put on life’s cart
Dreamt for bright future, we, beastly brave,
Unknowingly cart rolls in an unseen grave.
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Pardaz Aftab 18 November 2013

Super like.when inside god dies.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 15 November 2013

As Muslims we believ another man with d face of jesus ko suli pe charhaya gaya tha. Anyway dis was a great poem, a bit cryptic. Extraordinary gud job poet bro.

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Patricia Grantham 15 November 2013

A very poignant and meaningful poem. Makes one really to think and search deep into the heart and soul of man. Ver soul stirring write. Thanks.

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