Monday, August 11, 2008

When My Love Comments

Rating: 4.9

When the sun is a burnt out star,
when the moon is no longer the moon,
when near is as near as afar
when snow flakes fail to flake
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Ken e Hall
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Ramesh Rai 16 February 2014

Impossible so shall be writing till last breath. Regards ever.

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Patti Masterman 18 July 2011

A wonderful piece. I love the flow. It could be a song.

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wonderful and romantic.............me likey

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Martine Kolber 11 August 2008

beautiful feeling, beautiful poem. I hope she liked it; -) Take care, Martine

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Ken e Hall

Ken e Hall

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