When Tomorrow Comes [ 5 Senryu] Poem by Nudershada Cabanes

When Tomorrow Comes [ 5 Senryu]

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Tomorrow's promise
Awaits me to fulfill it
To regain my loss

Today I have failed
Made too many wrong choices
Committed mistakes

I can't turn back time
To undo the things I've done
Time is moving fast

But all is not lost
Failure gave me a lesson
To achieve success

I shall keep moving
And make up for my losses
When tomorrow comes

Monday, September 11, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: failure,success
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 11 September 2017

To fulfill the loss tomorrow's promise this time waits. Time cannot be turned back due to past mistake but tomorrow can be done well by decorating present in right manner. Keep yourself moving in right direction and get the success. Wonderful poem is shared.10

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Nudershada Cabanes 11 September 2017

Thanks Sir Kumarmani for your comment.

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