When We Argue Poem by kite remedy

When We Argue

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When I spoke of what I thought,
and she argued she was not,
and my proof was just not right,
and we fell into a fight.
We spit out all the words,
and had our feeling hurt.
I was trying to calm her down
but she said that I just clowned.
And anger rose so high
that I could not answer why
I had my palm on her cheek
and her tears rolled down and weak.
She started to cry out loud,
and then she began to shout
in this war I didn't win.
Hey, it wasn't what I mean.
And the point was when you're mad,
don't you make your girlfriend sad.
Some small mistakes or a mock
would possibly wreak havoc
on a young relationship
and make it sink so deep.
When the night dyed the sky
and her tears began to dry,
at last I could calm her down
and our lost love now was found.
When we went home through the street,
we had tuned our hearts so neat.
We walked slowly hand in hand,
as the word 'lover' presents.
And the argument we did sing
during the fight we'd been in,
it was nothing
and just nothing..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
<font color =fusha>Amy 28 November 2008

Great poem arguements truly understood nice one

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Carol Lovelady 28 November 2008

Great understanding of sensitivty-enjoyed this reading

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This happens a lot.. So true great work.. Krista

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This happens a lot.. So true great work.. Krista

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This happens a lot.. So true great work.. Krista

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