When You Are With Me Poem by nathan chilton
When You Are With Me
When you are with me i become happy,
you are by my side when i need you,
everytime you call me you are with me.
i know when you go away you are,
still going to be with me by
my side each time you go away.
hey Nathan, this is a wonderfull poem..I like it..But my truely opion-make it a bit longer, because it starts interesting, and then suddenly it stops..The readers want to read more/further. thanks. P.s i gave you a 9/10
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4/19/2024 7:58:41 PM # 1.0.0.1119
a really nice poem..i liked it alot, keep up the good work!