Gordon D Wilkinson

Rookie - 13 Points (Oxford - England)

When You Love - Poem by Gordon D Wilkinson

When tears roll across your cheeks
This heart bleeds a little
As your eyes close in pain
It dies a little
If it detects your despair
Into two pieces, it breaks
Never to be whole whilst you’re afflicted
So smile a little more
Wipe away those tears
Give me your pain to bear
Let me carry your cross of despair
Only then can I too heal

Comments about When You Love by Gordon D Wilkinson

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (1/13/2016 6:54:00 AM)

    Supeb..Let me carry your cross of despair
    Only then can I too heal
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  • (8/13/2009 9:58:00 AM)

    This is very moving Gorden..
    Hey remember when I first came here, you said,
    woman can make men look like headless chicken running every where blah! ! ! !

    this is good..very touching and moving.. not like your fun and witty ones..
    hey It is kinda incongruous when you write such one.....

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  • (8/2/2009 4:19:00 PM)

    I can relate to this one Gordon...beautiful heart breaking piece....Fi 10++++ (Report) Reply

  • Fay Slimm (8/2/2009 2:26:00 PM)

    A cry from the heart Gordon
    - - and tenderly written - -an appealing love poem - - 10 + + from Fay....
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, August 2, 2009

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