ben burgess

When You Smile

When you smile my day becomes anew,

When you smile I forget I was ever feeling blue,

When you smile my spirits are lifted,

When you smile it’s like you’re gifted,

When you smile we become as one,

One big smile bigger than the biggest sun,

More radiant than those powerful rays,

When you smile you light up my darkest of days,

When you smile everything else becomes insignificant,

When you smile you look so magnificent,

When you smile you’re like a wheel in motion,

The cogs of your brain turning with devotion,

Around and around this feeling sends me in a spin,

A complete feeling of happiness deep within,

When you smile.




copyright 2009 ben burgess all rights reserved

Poem Submitted: Wednesday, August 19, 2009
Poem Edited: Wednesday, August 19, 2009

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  • Prince Obed de la CruzPrince Obed de la Cruz (6/19/2010 4:02:00 AM)

    reminds me of girl i always think of for 3 years already....

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  • walm zand (9/8/2009 1:44:00 AM)

    What a joy if one can smile.....
    Loved the poem, describes very well the great joy of happines!

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  • Linda WinchellLinda Winchell (8/19/2009 8:51:00 PM)

    I like to smile so I can relate to this one really well. Great poem! Keep writing. God Bless, Linda

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