Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 413,573 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Where Can I Find - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Where can I find?

Where can I find window?
That shall allow
My vision to peep through
And assess true value

There was no confusion
But it was emerging as question
Often I used to wonder about human relation
It’s dealing with all aspects with excitation

Such nice things come to you as an opportunity
Where you try to understand the gift from an almighty
You need not search here and there
It is just before

Great many changes are found
She was the prettiest woman around’
But now I see her seized with parenthood
With all anxieties and worries on ground

What makes her perfect woman?
Truly to be called one and human
Yes I have seen the time playing decisive card
She has an answer with simple one word

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  • Bharati Nayak (12/8/2015 7:13:00 AM)


    There is no standard when we can define either a perfect woman or a man.It depends on what we mean by perfect.It changes from person to person.When a woman discharges her duty as wife, mother smoothly with love and care she is perfect wife and mother.She may not get time to look after herself while devoting all attention to other members of family.If she is full of kindness and sympathy she is the perfect human being and the most beautiful person.Thanks for sharing a thought provoking poem. (Report) Reply

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/8/2015 12:07:00 AM)


    Such a beautiful and insightful poem!
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/8/2015 12:06:00 AM)


    Good work! My favorite from you so far.
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  • The Poet Poet (12/7/2015 7:23:00 PM)


    a woman is lovely and perfectly in harmony only till she is married then once a child she has carried washed so many nappies made food for guests of hubby lost all charm has she what a perfect woman was she even hubby doesn't support her any more what perfection can you look for now she is pregnant once a gain a perfect oven is now this woman and you still look around for perfection i what bother not she has herself her own perfection lost why the hell she married i parry and in perfection still chase her tom dick and harry or sweet one what made you marry still again asks parry..well your perfection in poetry of her description is lovely (Report) Reply

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/7/2015 6:59:00 PM)


    What makes her perfect woman?
    Truly to be called one and human
    Yes I have seen the time playing decisive card
    She has an answer with simple one word
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Poem Submitted: Monday, December 7, 2015



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