Where Did Love Go Poem by Laurena Pamela Willetts

Where Did Love Go

Rating: 5.0


life can be lonely
even with a partner
when that partner no longer cares
merely sits and stares

what went wrong
when we were young
we promised it would be forever
now there is nobody there

no love, no fun, no laughter
no warm embrace, no kind face,
everything's an effort, everything's a pain
unless its' for his own self gain

the children have their own lives
thats how it should be
old age shared together
is how i thought it would be

who is this stranger that sits beside me
what changed us into different people
time, life, experience, age,
life is just another page

can we ever go back
to how we really were
or better to accept its gone
and live for tomorrow for today is done

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gordon Wilkinson 27 February 2009

Well written - life is lonely when there is no acknowledgement or caring - 10

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Dark Gurl 55 18 January 2009

it'z reminding me in someone that used to be my soul twin.. iam likin it alot i swear..

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Jerry Hughes 04 January 2009

Ain't it the truth, being taken for granted. A well conceived word picture. Best, Jerry

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Vinod Kumar 04 January 2009

A Clear vision of Human cycle, the rough and smooth space we walked. the suffer and lonliness are unveiled.thanks for sharing the great work, New Year Best Wishes.

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Laurena Pamela Willetts

Laurena Pamela Willetts

south wales u.k.
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