Where Is My Daddy? Poem by Florida Angel

Florida Angel

Florida Angel

Rio 40 Graus..Cidade Maravilha...Delray Beach

Where Is My Daddy?

Rating: 5.0


Everything went too fast to understand
in a flash of blinding lights I felt life
My dad somehow was there
the feelings were weird though
A mother and a father, as strangers...

Time passed by in quiet space
another change as a thunder came
I was being pulled out of the thumb
Free, maybe, finally...

But even more confusing now it was
The feelings and intuition I had before
now were all gone, I was one being
with no understanding of my surrounding
words, sounds, touch, smell, taste...all so NEW

Where is my Father?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joscephine Gomez 06 July 2007

What a creative way to say you miss your father and how very much alive those feelings come in your writing!

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Florida Angel

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Rio 40 Graus..Cidade Maravilha...Delray Beach
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