Tuesday, October 1, 2013

Where Is The High Wind? Comments

Rating: 5.0

Where is the high wind of the land?
Why don’t we have heaven
Whereas, we keep only earth?

Perhaps Its our habit to be into the dark
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Aftab Alam
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Khairul Ahsan 08 October 2013

'Tongue tied with intestine Why our hands are free un-grabbed' A powerful expression! Good title, eye catching!

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Ruby Mostazir 01 October 2013

excellent! 10 : -)

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Gajanan Mishra 01 October 2013

god write Aftab, matter comes to show the honesty, i like it, but for the welfare of all. As you know in my poem 'Family members'

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