Where Will I Find You? Comments

where will find you if i know you are not whenever ii go if you leave me as youth whats benefit in truth

when a golden harvest moon shines bright When I hear the graceful wings of a dove, when I miss your smiling face and your precious love. very very poetic. sweet remembrances. thank u. tony

A great start with a nice poem, Gray. Thank you very much,

will someone show me where you are On a twilight walk, or a moonlit night, when a golden harvest moon shines bright When I hear the graceful wings of a dove, when I miss your smiling face and your precious love. there will be no tomorrow, there will be total happiness. so nice an ending for the poem. i love your poem, its words, its flow and the fineness and purity in your words. thank you dear poet. tony

Beautiful romantic piece of poetry that captures the essence of love, well articulated and nicely penned in poetic diction with lovely rhyme scheme. An insightful depiction of voyage of bliss that is love, subtly written from the heart with conviction. Thanks for sharing Gray. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

That was truly awe inspiring. The imagery was as rich as the rhyme was excellent. Thank you for sharing!

Amazing imagery and confidence displayed in the beginning, I know you are some where where beauty lies, while recollecting the memoirs of the departed beloved. With wonderful rhyme the poem is very lovely. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

I know that where there is beauty there you are existing. Very wise and amazingly thoughtful sharing...10