Monday, September 7, 2009

Which Comes First Comments

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when two people get married
is it a marriage of Body and Mind?
or is it a marriage of Heart and Soul?
and which one comes first?
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louis rams
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 November 2009

'YOU ARE LIFE' and all that it holds Body, Mind, Heart and Soul. take me as you would a breath of air and my life with you i will share...it is combination thatplayssignificantrole in our life and tht is consdiered ideal....10 lovley poem to read

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Kranthi Pothineni 15 September 2009

Creatively composed but love my friend is a vast subject to know. Once again well composed write.

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Christine Kerr 12 September 2009

I like to know, Did you marry your first love, or are you a dreamer? Don't matter, I'm just wittnessing another beautiful write.

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i saw botht the love for God and a woman in this piece. those are my two favorites.

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Sandra Fowler 07 September 2009

A beautiful testimony to love. Shine on, Louis. 10/10. Always your friend at poemhunter. sandra

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