While I Am Loving You Poem by Aya Poetess

While I Am Loving You

Rating: 5.0


WHO ARE YOU WHILE I'M LOVING YOU?

Who were you before I loved you?
Who are you now while I'm loving you?
You are the ocean's expanse,
the spring soiree,
the spaces between places
and the indistinguishable things
that I wish I could name
You are palpable — a life, a life itself
yet I can't touch you

Monday, September 3, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: longing,love,spring,true love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 07 September 2018

A lovely love poem. I will try to give you a 10 but I have noticed that PH prefers to dump a thousand ads in the scroll in front of the voting booth and then the scroll is so long you cannot get it to stand still long enough to vote before it gets submerged by ads again. Just know this is a brilliant starry eyed sky full of 10's to me! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Bernard F. Asuncion 03 September 2018

Aya, such a lovely poem..............10+++++++++++++

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