Kelsea Osterman

Whisper - Poem by Kelsea Osterman

Do you hear it.
Do you hear the faint whisper.
The whisper that carries her last breath.
The breath she used to say I love you with.
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*I need some help if you read this send me a message and tell me what else to write give me an idea**

Comments about Whisper by Kelsea Osterman

  • Unwritten Soul (11/25/2011 9:02:00 AM)

    if i have to continue this i will write:
    Dont you listen with your heart
    The words she whispers on your soul
    Could be real or it just in a dream
    A whisper that never end
    Do you hear it
    Or you ignore it
    ..............What you think? ? hahaha it just a write though to fit what you already started :) Unwritten Soul
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  • Jenny-lynn Lavoie (4/23/2011 5:34:00 PM)

    do you see it
    do you see the pain she has suffered
    do you see her body weakended withered away to almost nothing
    the room is consumed with silence where her lifeless body lies
    all forever cherish her faint whisper that said I love you for her final goodbye
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  • (4/8/2010 1:52:00 PM)

    you could add: the last breath she used to show her affection.
    it was colder then winter itself.
    and that last breath she took, was one worth to remember.
    it was her last breath, and her last whisper.
    and to this day, he can still feel her breath in his face as she whispered 'i love you'

    -your welcome! (=
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, April 8, 2010

Poem Edited: Thursday, April 21, 2011

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