Quin Faas

Whistle

Robed with my Glance
Sits a man with Like mind

Breathe I feel his Self saying
Breathe I hear Myself writing

Instinctively he covers his Brow
With the All Colors Fedora

Breathe I feel his Self fighting
Breathe I hear Myself scribing

Breathe I feel Myself fighting
Breathe I hear his Self scribing

Reach Me
Reach Me

He pulls off his Disguise
I feel the man is Blind

Breathe with Me
Breathe with Me

Take me In
I’m Asking

Breathe I feel Myself implore
Breathe I hear his Self explore

Take me In
Not Asking

Discover my Eyes
Discover my Eyes


Seeking The Breath of We

Poem Submitted: Monday, October 12, 2009
Poem Edited: Thursday, June 30, 2011

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Comments about Whistle by Quin Faas

  • David Scott (11/4/2009 4:48:00 PM)

    This is incredible, Quin. I enjoyed this very much! A very exciting piece of writing.

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  • Anthony Welles (10/26/2009 10:34:00 PM)

    1st I'd like to say thank you for your comment...
    2nd When I read a piece of art whether its one of mine or someone else's if I can't feel anything I don't like it, when I read this I felt something and I like it a lot. Very interesting choice of words you used that helped me create a picture.Going under my favorites.

    Anthony...

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  • D.D Sherman (10/17/2009 2:42:00 AM)

    such a beautiful poem, i can definitely feel the tension, passion and sensuality.

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  • Philip Winchester (10/13/2009 7:31:00 PM)

    Fine Piece Quin, You are a Great Wordsmith, Grinding an a beating out the images.
    Yes another +10.
    Your Pal Anytime.
    Philip
    Thanks again for your kind comments ' Wrote you 'Woman Kind' t`otherday,
    hope you liked it.

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  • Raymond Rivera (10/13/2009 12:50:00 AM)

    Dang it, Quin. You're writing hits home so hard it's unbelievable. When I read these, I wish someone would write about me in such a way...

    This is just so beautiful which is funny because I (semi) firmly believe that 'love stinks' Yet this poems makes me long for it....

    Great, amazing, superb, fantastic writing.

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  • Spiritwind WoodSpiritwind Wood (10/12/2009 9:52:00 PM)

    Wow! ! You write so beautifully, every word, every motion-you feel it all.you keep me wanting to read more-as beautiful as you-20++++

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