Whistles From Aether Poem by Julian Carlos Co

Whistles From Aether

Rating: 5.0


It begins with no sensible truth,
No chaos to kiss.
It's not a figment of mind,
But a figure that dawns upon men, love.

We love because we're incomplete,
So to forge the pieces we lost,
We struggle to fight,
The armies of our own.

Carry us home
To hills with no extent,
Seas to know sides,
Deaths with no hope

Furiously it swept the dreams,
Our childood or youth.
We weren't adults till then,
but our immaturity, purged by rain.

Now is it okay?
To drift unto the unknown,
Possibly disappear from men.
Hereby, sleep for eternity.

Tuesday, May 29, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: growth
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 30 May 2018

Carry us home! ! Home sweet home. Thanks for sharing.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 30 May 2018

Julian, such a fine free verse....10+++++

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Julian Co 30 May 2018

Thanks once again Bernard

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Julian Carlos Co

Julian Carlos Co

Davao City, Philippines
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