Send Me The Fixed Moon Poem by Julian Carlos Co
Send Me The Fixed Moon
"Kill the ones that flies."
Those who came are murdered
The Father will bury his sons
And The Sons will bury their father.
As the wars of mind clinged to judgement
It needs no prayer, but a jury to decide
For as the temperature of battle rose,
It doesn't bloom, but rather wither.
"I call for the one up above."
No, he will not hear you when dawn.
Will not see one in dusk.
But shall bow, kneel to the man in the moon.
Space is a wildland.
It makes you expect something,
While you assumed everything,
You ended up finding nothing.
For space is different than the cosmos.
If love, wealth, and life is must,
Then you're moveable,
A fragile being that kept on hiding in
A box filled with comfortable lies you made.
There's a difference between shine and light.
Shine is beauty, elegance in coat of gold,
While light is the truth, wrapped in love,
But if I was to choose, I'll pick none.
Lastly, I have come as one
Broken into two then splitted into pieces
I am lost, my mind floats in the cosmos
While my body's on the ground.
So give me the mocking jay, and I'll send you the fixed moon.
Julian, such a marvelous poem of the day. Congrats for being chosen...................
Good rendition of words nice brought forth in persuasive poetic expressions with conviction. A beautiful work of art. Thanks for sharing Julian and do remain enriched.
A thought provoking poem. The penultimate stanza invokes darkness. Beautifully crafted and well executed write. Congratulations, Julian for a well deserved POD.
This is wonderful poetry written using extraordinary imagination. Enjoyed thoroughly. Congrats on being chosen as POD.
A highly imaginative poem so nicely executed. Thanks and congratulations for being selected this poem as the poem of the day.
'No, he will not hear you when dawn' I don't understand that line in the third stanza. You do portray the sense of being lost.
It talks about ignorance of an omnipotent being, and we humans finding another source of strength. Thanks for commenting, God bless.
brilliantly penned- Shine is beauty, ..light is the truth ..I'll pick none ..I am lost, my mind floats in the cosmos ..So give me the mocking jay, and I'll send you the fixed moon. /// excellently penned life in lost
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Light is the truth! ! Wisdom! Light to the world. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.