David Darbyshire

Rookie (6/11/54 / Darwen England)

Who Ever Dies Last - Poem by David Darbyshire

Watching the vultures circle above
Wishing I was in Love.
Sitting here, holding back a tear
Wondering were you are my Dear?

I know, I have had a bad past,
and I fligh my flag, half mast.
Whoever dies last,
Don't worry our Love will Last

Before you my Love,
it seams I will depart.
I'll go to the angels above,
leaving with a heavy heart.

Who ever dies last,
their life they have cast.
As I sit here and cry,
I ask my lord Why?

So until we met again,
In the bright light, no pain.
Who ever dies last,
I know our love will last


Comments about Who Ever Dies Last by David Darbyshire

  • (8/3/2006 1:21:00 PM)


    Your poems are getting longer, Dave, and more philosophical. This one is obviously popular. But I like your funny ones best.

    Love, Fran xx
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  • (8/3/2006 7:41:00 AM)


    Really liked this one David some lovely lines, and good use of repetition a poem which grows on you with each read.... shall go into my favs. nice one.

    Vincent
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  • (8/3/2006 7:23:00 AM)


    Good rhyme, with a twist of romantic view. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, August 3, 2006

Poem Edited: Friday, August 20, 2010


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