Thursday, August 3, 2006

Who Ever Dies Last Comments

Rating: 5.0

Watching the vultures circle above
Wishing I was in Love.
Sitting here, holding back a tear
Wondering were you are my Dear?
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David Darbyshire
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Francesca Johnson 03 August 2006

Your poems are getting longer, Dave, and more philosophical. This one is obviously popular. But I like your funny ones best. Love, Fran xx

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Not Long Left 03 August 2006

Really liked this one David some lovely lines, and good use of repetition a poem which grows on you with each read.... shall go into my favs. nice one. Vincent

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Patricia Gale 03 August 2006

Good rhyme, with a twist of romantic view.

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