Who Is Who Poem by nader baheri

Who Is Who

Rating: 5.0


Days after days
I see an empty man in the mirror
With scary face
With illusive smile

Days after nights
I see a man in the mirror
With his eyes stare at me
And me gazing at me through him
Rises again from his own ash
And continues his life with a dash

I feel someone back on me
So I never look back
Not to be frightened by an
Another shadow of me

In a dark room at night
When a vicious spirit tries to pull out my last remained stamina
And swallows my head in the blood bathtub
Oh, no, please no
My spirit is dedicated to you
And everything I used to do

My soul is dedicated to you
But after I know
Who (is) you
And who is who?

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
dedicated to Micheal A.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Musfiq Us Shaleheen 28 November 2013

the mirror the perception of mind... shadow replies through itself... very well and full proof...10/10

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Lyn Paul 06 October 2013

A tribute to someone special to you. I like the emotion and the release in these words

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Unwritten Soul 05 October 2013

you already answered it, who is who as A is A, B is B,1 is 1, who is who...if who is kinda of a name, so it is who...if who is your soul, it is your own soul...its not mirror that is telling you but your mind to accept..nice work_Soul

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