Who Was She? Poem by Anita Atina

Who Was She?

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She was wearing a long white dress
Gliding serenely, through the mist

I sensed rather than saw her beauty
Along a forgotten mountain trail

Who was she?
Why did she feel so familiar?

Was she from another life?
Or an oracle to my future?

For a brief moment, time stood still
As I walked past, myself

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Richard Blanch 08 February 2009

Terrific, and different: stripped right down to a classic simplicity and quiet rhythm- and then that wonderfully ambiguous ending. Thanks Anita.

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