Whose Apples? Poem by Paul Hansford

Whose Apples?

Rating: 5.0


(a poem in three voices)
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(The gardener)
This is my garden; my apple tree
has over-reached itself. The branches,
weighed down with fruit, threaten to break.
If I had read the signs, thinned out when it was time,
the crop would be less heavy, the fruit less small.
And what there is, is damaged. If it's not birds
it's caterpillar, wasp, or earwig.
It will all be rotten soon. I don't know why I bother.

(The blackbird)
This is my garden; this tree I sat in and proclaimed my own
when it was full of blossom, with war-cry love-call song.
Then mating, nesting, bringing up the brood.
The days were scarcely long enough, but that
was long ago. My children gone,
there's time now for myself, time for a treat.
My yellow chisel bill invades the flesh
of these fine apples. Delicious. This is the life.

(The wasps)
This is our garden - insects do not have time
for individuality. We built the colony, us lads,
chewed wood to make our paper nest, and now
we work to feed the grubs.
'Lads', that is, using the word loosely - for us
gender is not important; that's for the queen,
and, as it may be, the ones who service her,
none of our business.
But we need food too, and when we find a fruit
where blackbird has broken in, we eat our way inside,
till only skin and core encase our private eating/drinking den.
So what if it's fermenting? If we get tiddly,
and roll about, and buzz a drunken hum, then who's to care?
And if they do, we'll sting 'em.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Janice Windle 02 July 2009

I enjoyed this very much, especially the punchline at the end of each stanza! The voices are well defined - and the gardener definitely doesn't own 'his apples' - great idea, cunningly executed! x Jan

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Katherine Sessor 13 July 2008

Very lovely poem! i love the way you describe each creature's version of tree. It blends and shows much feeling. I love it! it's so peaceful and it calms me. kat, =)

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Onelia Avelar 09 July 2008

A marvellous poem, I found it by chance. Feel lucky to read it - very fresh and vivid, just made my day. Thank you!

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Susan Jarvis 07 July 2008

A wonderful poem. I love the way stanza two and three serve to disprove the gardener's claim that; 'This is my garden; my apple tree...' Magnificent images - 'My yellow chisel bill invades the flesh...' is a linguistic delight that conjures a spectacular image. S :)

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Original Unknown Girl 03 July 2008

What a fab poem, I love it when the same idea marinates and creates very different flavours. Clever and witty and I love the idea of drunken wasps (especially if they climb in the watered down jam in a jar! !) *is that cruel? * Cool poem(s) Paul - Enjoyed! HG: -) xx

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