Whose Who Poem by Rhymer Rhymer
Whose Who
she and i ate the same food
she and i slept on the same cot
she and i have the same dress
she and i keep same opinion
she loves me
i love her
but in the dream
what i saw
why she didn't see the same
why difference
who is she she and who i am
whose who
but still she is my companion
told half of me....
Wow! Your shadow is your best friend. You got the whole 5 star. Check my poem 'Ode To An Unseen Image' as the complement of your poem.
This is crystal clearly composed combination clean and so close captured. Thank YOU!
but in the dream what i saw why she didn't see the same why difference who is she she and who i am.......................here lies THE difference, dear Poet. A thought-provoking poem? Not for me
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