Guarded Heart

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: Why Am I Coming Undone: - Poem by Guarded Heart

It hurts everywhere
Inside, it erodes all i have
Outside, i'm sore, my eyes don't shine
I have the strongest urge
To be held so i can cry
Just to release the emotion inside
Maybe i do need help
Why does everything think there is
Something so wrong with me
Why does everyone betray me
Never mind the tears are coming now
Please somebody help
So unworthy of everything
It's time for me to go
Time to leave
Find another place
One that might accept me
Or just expect more of me
Why do i hurt so much
I need someone to need me
Someone to be there for
To give me a sense of purpose
But most of all, i need someone to heal me
Whats wrong with me
Where did i screw up, what did i do wrong
Why am i coming undone
And down my face the tears run
Everyone seems to think i'm better off
Alone, where i can affect no one
But all i ever did was try to please everyone
I'm unraveling, everything is going wrong
And the tears keep coming


Comments about : Why Am I Coming Undone: by Guarded Heart

  • (7/28/2006 3:11:00 PM)


    Beautiful poem. We all need that at times: : : someone to hold us so we can cry, heal the pain, and feel needed and accepted for who we are. You have expressed the raw emotion and sorrow very well here. So sorry for your pain. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, July 27, 2006

Poem Edited: Thursday, August 19, 2010


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