Why Hatred.(On Poemhunter…) ? Poem by Geoffrey Fafard

Why Hatred.(On Poemhunter…) ?



Radical displays of introversion
And self induced recoiling bleakness
Seem to be the trademark of some
Nasty, distressed and saddened
pencil pushers and word throwers
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Who bit you and left their venom
In your veins?
Your tourniquet turns black from red
Is that all you see, all you feel
I don't fancy waking up in your dawn
I wish I could rid you of such poison
Lance and rectify your suppurating wound
Clear away the dark air that spins and weaves
Like a full cloud of biting flies
Around your thoughts and theories
While you do your best to detest
Your brothers and sisters
Simply for placing thoughts out loud
That don't sit with your dark ones
The sad thing though, my writer, my poet
Is that in the end it (your self sympathy)
Will devour and swallow all of you
With just the faintest hiccup.

Saturday, November 19, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: hatred,sadness,words
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Read a bit of aggression today here on Poem Hunter in the lines of some poets and between them
'Why? ' I ask. 'Because..! ' I answered, 'Tough times follow some through the years.'
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Paul Warren 19 November 2016

I think that the venting of issues makes people realise what the world is lie. Poetry should speak to you. I don't I keep some things but it is a person's right to write it. Points of view is what the world turns on.

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Geoffrey Fafard 19 November 2016

P.S. Especially then when P/H.have to pull this offensive crap off….!

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Geoffrey Fafard 19 November 2016

Thats all well and noble Paul BUT when specific names of poets are mentioned and personal crap is thrown at them simply because they are doing what they love and writing…then I think those that criticise and vent their nastiness are lower than my pet snake's belly…sorry.

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