Why Me Poem by Sean Joyce

Why Me

Rating: 5.0


My specialist has found a spot
and it’s on a vital organ, And
yes I know they are all vital
but this one more than most

Such a little speck she said
You will think that it’s absurd
Such a little thing she said
but she could not say the word

Friends have been around
some whispering occurred
They ask me how I feel and
some history was inferred

Now things will have to change
this upsets the applecart
now that tiny specks of poetry
have been found upon my heart

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shelley Colyer 25 January 2007

really enjoyed the `twist` to this one, first one read as a new member, thank you.

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Jeanette Krantz 25 January 2007

this was exceptional! ! The ending was perfect.

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Ernestine Northover 12 February 2006

That's a very sweet poem Sean, thank you for being considerate in how I may be thinking at this time. Love Ernestine XXX

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Duncan Wyllie 02 February 2006

Oh! Sean! You kept me guessing here. So you're a poet at heart? Great Thing. Love Duncan

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Sean Joyce

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Galway, Ireland
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