Why You? Comments

nice one specially this part: Deep in my heart I just believe You are my best friend in joy and grief You are my sun in a late dark night Wiping away my tears of sorrow and fright keep writing :)

Nice poem and I like the rhythm of the poem...10+ Merna.

i liked the last line the most......wonderful rhyming..........10 do read my poem(johann sebastian bach) ...i have made my final touches on it....you can read it now if you want

great poem sarah...nice work...simple and no difficult expressions...10+..

sweet words reflects a sincere love! well expressed!

Just like salt and pepper shackers