Wicked Animal Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Wicked Animal

Rating: 5.0


Man is basically wicked animal
No one can see his ideas even if naked
Either before computer or before sky
He will struggle with his mind and try

His brain is always matching with speed
So much eagerness with lots of greed
No stoppage over its planning and thoughts
Mind struggles and so many ways are sought

It will never satisfy his ego
Even if it requires to forgo
That is the mentality and real fact
It requires little restrain to act

It is good to have appetite for knowledge
It may then give enough time for leverage
With dedication and efforts it can give result
Only inner urge should be controlled and remain well built

The universe and nature has been unexplored
It is like digging of well in small hole of the bore
It may open earth's belt to give enough of water
That is all we want for need to cater

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 August 2012

Man is basically wicked animal No one can see his ideas even if naked

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 November 2012

gud Comment +1 Good effort Peter J Brown13 hours ago Good meaning, the poem needs a bit of tinkering regarding the flow/rhyme, in my opinion, to come up to the standard of content.Comment +1 a poem of life Keep writing :)

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 November 2012

Alan Green 'Guppyman'13 hours ago the poet tells of all the lives lived Comment +1 i like wicked animals

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 November 2012

Chyna Bug13 hours ago ok animals are scary some times

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 August 2012

Very True zeek estrada24 minutes ago Nice! Comment +1 GOOD

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 August 2012

Julia Davis14 minutes ago Well written

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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