Wicked Folly At My Back Comments
Morning calls with a sickening frown
wicked folly at my back,
sea gulls softly wail
circling bout my weathered ship,
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interesting stanza with SIMILE- Then like lightening from the sky I see her coming down; her skin is white, her eyes are pale, her beauty cold as death; waves in madness flee her wrath in frenzied swirls are spent, her voice thunders from above a demon in despair, in an act of desperate love I lift her bridal veil. excellent
Thank you Mahtab for taking the time to read and comment. It is greatly appreciated.
Ruta, thank you for the comment, the sea, a wild and wonderful place for the imagination to float free.
I am in the forefront of their wails. Rank and accomplishment whom do they please tributes to kings who grow tired and weak their wood ships tossed about in the gales. September winds blow! I lash tight the sails......really enjoyed this poem.. thank u. the ferocious dark angel who comes from the skies and your imagination of the winter cold... thank u dear poet. tony
I like this blow of impatient wind which tossed the ship.. Well written
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12/27/2025 9:14:27 PM # 1.0.0
This poem is beautifully captured. I love the following lines........ Then like lightening from the sky I see her coming down; her skin is white, her eyes are pale, her beauty cold as death; waves in madness flee her wrath in frenzied swirls are spent, her voice thunders from above a demon in despair, in an act of desperate love I lift her bridal veil. Thanks for sharing.
Thank you Kumarmani for all your insightful comments. Keep writing great poems my friend!