Friday, September 22, 2017

Wild Love! Dance With Severed Wings No More Comments

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Wild love!
Dance with severed wings no more!
Demanding heights these glorious scenes explore,
the precipice awaits, leap, take on flight
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Captain Cur
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Mihaela Pirjol 28 October 2017

An ardent write! I love the repetition of the first verse in each stanza!

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Unwritten Soul 12 October 2017

The passionate is very vividly seen inside the one and only Captain Cur, so strong words, beautiful words, wonderful you..i loved it, this is classic you!

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Troy Cochran 24 September 2017

Aspiring heights and luscious depths: an invitation to leap that throws all caution to the wind. You have coaxed the lazy stream in me almost to gush. I think I'm blushing. But what is art without too much passion? Or love, that is not more than a little crazy? This poem conjures scenes out of Middle Earth for me. Thanks for sharing. :)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 22 September 2017

Wild love has severed wings and dances demanding glorious scenes to explore. Lifting into the sun's new morning light emotion waits. Above the mountain to glow more wild love flies. The gold tinged liquid pours steady deprived power. Blazing heart sees wild love's flying. An amazing and brilliant poem is shared that reveals about. wild love's power and dance. Excellent poem!

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Rini Shibu 22 September 2017

Smoky haze lava springs forth..the powerful words and full of love

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