Willing To Look At This Objectively Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

Willing To Look At This Objectively

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Are you willing to look at this objectively?

'I suppose I am.
At that depends on how much sense you make.
I'll give it a shot.'

Great.
All I ask is that you be open minded.

'Okay.
Cool.
I'm listening.'

You are an adult.
And you have made your own decisions,
Right?

'Of course I did.
Didn't you? '

Remember when you rushed into purchasing,
Your new home, and two fancy brand new cars?
Clothes and those back to back trips,
You and your friends took to the Caribbean?
And you laughed at me,
When I said I could barely afford a public bus pass?

'Go ahead.
Rub it in.
You couldn't wait to bring this up, huh? '

Oh...
No. No. No...
My mind has matured above that.
I was going to recommend you get a bus pass too.
And slowly you can remove those disguises.

It's okay.
I use to have fantasies myself.
Of being an acclaimed and famous writer.
I thank God that's no longer a fantasy.

'Well...
We all suffer from our delusions and mistakes made.
Thank you for helping me see it from your point of view.
I am glad you understand the position I am in.'

You have no idea.
I am totally empathetic.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ace Of Black Hearts 27 January 2012

I really like this one, it's great. When you create these roles its like having a conversation with yourself. That sounds crazy right. But I know its true. For a lot of my conversation exist on paper in one form or another. No where near as elaborate or as creative as yours. Definitely a good write.

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