Wind Rain In Carpet Roses Poem by Terence George Craddock

Wind Rain In Carpet Roses

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present felt wind
blowing in gusts
is having no effect
on joy lip red roses
laden carpet roses

decades blooms
enduring beauty
perennial blesses
old hardy shrubs
sadly showers heavy

rain damages red roses
sodden spoils soft blooms
silken wax soft origami
drips copious raindrop tears
newblooms unfold glorious


Terence George Craddock (Afterglows Echoes Of Starlight)
Copyright © Terence George Craddock

Friday, January 12, 2024
Topic(s) of this poem: red
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Original version of the split images 'Lips Red Carpet Roses', 'Perennial Red Carpet Roses', 'Blooms Silken Wax Origami' and 'Tears Gentle Wash Red Roses', by the poet Terence George Craddock. Inspired by the poem 'A Trickle Of Thoughts - 52', by the poet Rose Marie Juan-austin. Dedicated to Rose Marie Juan-austin. Written in December 2023&January 2024 on the 12.12.2023&13.1.2024.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 13 January 2024

It is heartwarming to know that this poem has been inspired by my poem, A Trickle Of Thougbts -52.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 12 January 2024

Heavy downpour of rain can destroy roses specially in their soft blooms. A well thought out poem.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 12 January 2024

Cont. 2) the carpet of roses as expressed in the poem. The strength of the roses can tame the harshness of the wind.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 12 January 2024

A wonderful poem showing how the two classical elements of nature affect other nature like the

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