Window O' Heaven Poem by rinki nandy

Window O' Heaven

Rating: 5.0


Sweaty days and cruel summer,
without sleep and hunger,
star's burning and causing anger,
stay indoors and feel better,
pity the workers under the heartless sun sans shelter,
mercury rising above the meter,
deserted roads and buildings for haven.

A miracle on the other side of the window,
a huge carbon black cloud,
within moments surround the ground,
engulf the sun and gobble it up,
fear him with your aura and glare,
paint the sky with your color,
defeat the sun and shame it with your presence,
scare him with your thunder,
wipe him off from sky's face,
outshine him with your grace,
exhaust him in this race,
embarrass him, destroy his base,
come down cloud, reveal your pace,
hit the planet like an ace.

Set the trees free, please be fair,
deliberately they dance with no care,
delightfully tail the wind sans fear,
wet feathers can't fly,
stronger ones give it a try,
squeezed they seem and look up the sky,
delayed so long, i should have died,
missed you long, have i survived?

Beat the earth's dusty face,
show no mercy, spare no base,
let it know how it tastes,
when you arrive and make haste.
Watching a marvel,
you destroying the gravel,
witnessing a wonderment,
standing so close in amusement,
beauty of your presence capturing each moment,
finding self in nature's lap and endowment.
Filling my heart with spirit and joy,
life is beautiful i know why,
timeless moments at the window,
precious emotions shared with the window,
the door or the window? ,
window o' heaven!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 26 July 2010

================= ================= Thunderous and Rebellious Poetry against scorching biting blistering sun [summer] to be soothed by the lithe emollient of thunderous cloud…and its violence to subdue the vociferous sun… Here Ma’am I remember RNT’s description of ‘Kaal Baishkhi’ [Thunderous moments of Summer Vaishak] …excellent diction as usual with your uncanny high pitch…. Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

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Window o' heaven... portal of life, and hope. Delightful poem. Good one; D

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