Thursday, January 1, 2015

Winds Of Winter Comments

Rating: 5.0

Winters winds chime ancestral wails
and glide auretic melodies
That swail the earth in whitewash gales
And cling the foam of memories
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Kevin Patrick
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Kumarmani Mahakul 25 February 2015

Winter wind whispers through my windowpane makes me amazing and special feelings come in mind. Beautiful as well as wonderful poem shared.

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Luo Zhihai 27 January 2015

This is a very sweet poem. I like it! And I would like to translate this poem into Chinese. Can I?

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Luo Zhihai 27 January 2015

This is a very sweet poem. I like it! And I would like to translate this poem into Chinese. Can I?

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Luo Zhihai 27 January 2015

This is a very sweet poem. I like it! And I would like to translate this poem into Chinese. Can I?

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* Sunprincess * 09 January 2015

.........oh I should have waited for summer to read this poem....your pen has worked magic....I could feel the coldness of winter....still I loved it :)

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Daniel Brick 09 January 2015

I live in Minnesota (in the southern part) so I can fully appreciate this poem which celebrates (I think that's the right word) the ARCTIC SIRENS of the winds. For the past two days they've been howling outside my apartment creating almost exactly the situation of your poem. The movement of your poem seem to come to rest in a place identified as A BITTERSWEET SNOWS CAPE PARADISE. I reminded of one of Hart Crane's VOYAGES which also comes to rest in the northland in the phrase THE SEAL'S WIDE SPINDRIFT GAZE TOWARD PARADISE. But your poem has one last action which strikes me as particularly brave I WILL DANCE (THE WIND'S) CAUCOPHANY. This will surely be a shamanic dance of union with those winds.

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Bhargabi Dei Mahakul 09 January 2015

Beautiful winds of winter whisper through windowpane. Very nice imagery shines in your composition. Beautiful poem.

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