Kumarmani Mahakul

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Winter Is Coming Slowly - Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Little, little cold is arriving
With wings of coldness and snow
This will cover our minds sure
Pure heart will need warmness

Wisdom of God season brings dear
You visit the light in life sure
Purity is sparking of life glows
That we feel coldness needs warm.

Blanket is ready to hold mind,
We need to cover this and feel
Warmness covers body and spirit
Winter adores seasonal wisdom.

Winter is coming slowly it sees,
The breeze sparks light more
Slow coldness is covered by leaves,
Trees wear blanket of snow in day.

Topic(s) of this poem: life, spiritual, winter


Comments about Winter Is Coming Slowly by Kumarmani Mahakul

  • Terry Craddock (12/23/2015 11:06:00 PM)


    Warming Waiting Wallflower Trees

    spring opening sun caress warming
    fresh clothes waiting wallflower trees
    in new gowns adorned green growing


    Copyright © Terence George Craddock
    Inspired by the poem 'Winter Is Coming Slowly' by the poet Kumarmani Mahakul.
    Dedicated to the poet Kumarmani Mahakul.
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  • Terry Craddock (12/23/2015 11:06:00 PM)


    Leaf Mould Bless First New Buds

    leaf mould gift quilt blankets
    roots warming comforting protecting
    leaf mould bless first new buds


    Copyright © Terence George Craddock
    Inspired by the poem 'Winter Is Coming Slowly' by the poet Kumarmani Mahakul.
    Dedicated to the poet Kumarmani Mahakul.
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  • Terry Craddock (12/23/2015 11:05:00 PM)


    Spring Bud Leaf Mould Blessings

    leaf mould quilt blankets
    roots warming comforting protecting
    leaf mould bless first buds

    spring opening sun caress warming
    will clothe waiting wallflower trees
    in gowns adorned green growing


    Copyright © Terence George Craddock
    Inspired by the poem 'Winter Is Coming Slowly' by the poet Kumarmani Mahakul.
    Dedicated to the poet Kumarmani Mahakul.
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  • Terry Craddock (12/23/2015 11:05:00 PM)


    Cold Wrapping World Leaf Mould Warming Roots

    bare trees bare skies or grey overcast cold wrapping
    trees stripped naked leaves litter cover ground leaving
    leaf mould for roots warming comforting protecting


    Copyright © Terence George Craddock
    Inspired by the poem 'Winter Is Coming Slowly' by the poet Kumarmani Mahakul.
    Dedicated to the poet Kumarmani Mahakul.
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  • Terry Craddock (12/22/2015 8:13:00 PM)


    Sudden Timeless Slow Cold Creeping

    feel the cold slow cold creeping
    creeping over frost land a shroud chilling
    mist ground sudden timeless freezing

    beneath touch your fingertips stroking
    stroking land into ice stozen sterility binding
    ice ties shall dig claws into fields ice lacing

    barren frozen mute land freezing
    upon spring births life back into ice melting
    land regenerating into life fast pacing


    Copyright © Terence George Craddock
    Inspired by the poem 'Winter Is Coming Slowly' by the poet Kumarmani Mahakul.
    Dedicated to the poet Kumarmani Mahakul.
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  • Terry Craddock (12/22/2015 7:17:00 PM)


    Trees Stripped Naked

    bare trees
    bare skies
    grey overcast
    cold wrapping

    trees
    stripped naked
    litter leaves
    cover chill ground

    leaving
    leaf mould
    roots warming
    comforting protecting

    to bless
    birth first
    new buds
    spring opening

    to clothe
    trees in birth
    new gowns
    adorned green growing


    Copyright © Terence George Craddock
    Inspired by the poem 'Winter Is Coming Slowly' by the poet Kumarmani Mahakul.
    Dedicated to the poet Kumarmani Mahakul.
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  • Terry Craddock (12/19/2015 7:46:00 PM)


    'Slow coldness is covered by leaves'

    bare trees bare skies or grey overcast cold wrapping, trees stripped naked leaves litter cover ground, leaving leaf mould roots warming comforting protecting, to bless first new buds of spring opening, to clothe trees again in new gowns adorned growing :)
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  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (10/29/2015 7:41:00 AM)


    Ya this year winter is crawling, soon we shall have chilling nights and foggy days... Amazing poem...10+++ (Report) Reply

  • Sanjukta Nag (10/28/2015 10:05:00 AM)


    Winter is coming slowly and it can be seen perfectly in your poem. A beautiful avatar of nature is portrayed here so beautifully. Each stanza is amazing. (Report) Reply

  • Liza Sudina (10/28/2015 9:01:00 AM)


    Original that you see warmneth in winter, yes, this feeling of warmth becomes even more sharp in winter! (Report) Reply

  • Saheb Mohapatra (10/28/2015 8:28:00 AM)


    you have nicely depicted the absolute coldness of the winter.....................yes winter is arriving silently and slowly and it has brought many white clothes with it for the nature................................excellent poem.......liked it. (Report) Reply

  • Saheb Mohapatra (10/28/2015 8:24:00 AM)


    very nicely depicted the coldness of winter...........there is a great connectivity.........you have perfectly carried the topic to the end of this beautiful poem................greatly liked it. (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George (10/28/2015 5:05:00 AM)


    Winter is arriving slowly, demanding the need to keep blankets ready! Enjoyed this poem on the seasonal change! (Report) Reply

  • Akhtar Jawad (10/27/2015 8:01:00 PM)


    A beautiful symbolic poem, unlike trees snow of old age covers us slowly............................ (Report) Reply

  • Jaishree Nair (10/27/2015 6:20:00 PM)


    Winter season is approaching ready to spread its seasonal wisdom. Nice lines .Enjoyed .Thanks (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Kurt (10/27/2015 3:57:00 PM)


    Winter does sneak up on us. Thanks, Kumarmani (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, October 27, 2015



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