Winter's Farewell. Poem by Fay Slimm

Winter's Farewell.

Rating: 5.0


Iron-gray and warmth repelling
Cloud clad skies in winter drab.
Lowering and laughter quenching.
Cold errodes in icy grab.


Stone-still and mind consuming.
Clammy air bites into thought.
Blanketing and effort dampening.
Movement to cessation brought.


Grave-quiet and breath dispelling.
Stifled breeze bestirs no leaf.
Shivering and strangely yawning,
Nature hangs in heavy grief.


Love-sick for sun's restoring.
Waits, entranced by chilled suspense.
Sensually, in silent pining.
Anticipating recompense.


Rose-pink with blush of longing
Imagines 'Spring' on conquest bent.
Garlanding and colour strewing
Nuptual bed's abandonment.

Monday, July 28, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: colour,farewell,longing,pink,sick
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Robert Howard 18 December 2008

Beautifully constructed and strongly focused. The visual and sonic images perfectly support the poem's inevitable drive toward spring's renewal.

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Bob Gibson 09 August 2008

What a brilliant poem! a 10 definatly and a keeper!

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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