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Wintery Senses

Rating: 4.0

My wintry friends were out today
Waving cold, bare arms in the breeze,
'Hello friend, ' whispered the trees.

Above them black crows danced in the air,
Swaying, up and below grey clouds,
Singing sweet songs so proud.

I stood still and listened hard,
Factory hammers growled and groaned,

While cars sped by and moaned.
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Thursday, February 16, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: senses,winter
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A poem I wrote to help the children at work.
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 05 May 2017

An innocent image. Thanks

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Bri Edwards 30 March 2017

p.s. thanks for the Poet's Note!

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Bri Edwards 30 March 2017

Della, i'm pretty sure that Rod 'found you' after reading one of your poems in my/our showcase(s) . i hope so. it is very nice to see a 'new one' here today. i have not even finished reading it and i HAVE TO HAVE IT for April's showcase. i 'know' you won't mind if i 'borrow' it. thanks. now i shall finish reading and commenting. favorite stanza so far: Upon the ground a feather flew, I wonder if the bird knew of a missing, soft feather now by my shoe? ...........i wonder is this poem will end up in one of your books. ..............................................................................hmm? another favorite stanza: feel so lucky that I can hear, Smell, touch, taste and I can see, I am so lucky to be me! great writing. to MyPoemList and the April showcase ASAP. bri :)

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Rod Mendieta 16 February 2017

Oh there's bound to be one of them kids tempted to lick a dew drop from a petal. I'm even starting to feel the urge myself!

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