Wisdom Poem by Deepti Agarwal

Wisdom

Rating: 4.8


For Long
was caged
inside own
iron walls..

For Long
was chained
with own
disturbing thoughts..

For Long
was trapped
within own
emotions & feelings..

Oh! What a Bliss
now, to be
free of all and
just be Me....!

~01/05/10~

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 20 May 2010

Oh! What a Bliss now, to be free of all and just be Me....! oh what an idea. we forget to be ourselves. every one of us is unique. spread this view everywhere and we will create human beings who believes in originality. too often we are just blind followers of others. thank u deepti

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Kesav Easwaran 17 May 2010

Out off the cage...freed off the chains...coos the skylark...cheers to freedom! Good piece...reflective...refreshing...10

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Kee Thampi 06 May 2010

a trap of words fly to my mind with own disturbing thoughts.. For Long was trapped with, , , , , ,

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