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Wisdom Of A Broken Heart67 - Poem by DAVID GERARDINO

our love became mechanical,
are transmitter fell to the ground,
the kisses turned to concrete, and
the hugs turned to steel, the moment
filled with money, the laughter filled
with spite, and a moment of silence,
for a love thats about to die...

Comments about Wisdom Of A Broken Heart67 by DAVID GERARDINO

  • (7/19/2006 8:41:00 PM)

    Hi David, It's very true, It is hard to be in a relationship. It takes a lot of work trust, honesty, sincerity and love. This is something I thing most relationships are lacking. No one seems to be together and after a certain age we become wary.
    Excellent poem, Great vivid imagery and emotions. Take care.
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  • (8/25/2005 3:02:00 PM)

    superb use of descriptive words, much enjoyed. (Report) Reply

  • (8/16/2005 3:53:00 AM)

    Invest in EverReady Batteries. It will perk new life into this 'lifeless' charade! LSP (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, August 15, 2005

Poem Edited: Monday, September 12, 2005

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