Wishes Poem by DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK

Wishes

Rating: 5.0


How easy is born a paradise
Decked with many flavors and many hues
Spellbound as if of a waterhole
In arid and up in a tree an apple
Chased times through thick and thin
Transported by the moon and the sun
Oh! Nearer got it I, yet flits away a little, a little
Like a butterfly from flower to flower in a sky still

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
We have ceaseless wishes but get a few materialized
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 30 March 2022

A beautiful poem so well expressed and rightly said. Great imagery. Liked the closure line. To my favorites.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 30 March 2022

So very true. It takes perseverance and strength and unceasing prayers to make them materialized. And despite we have those efforts, still they are so elusive.

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