With A Kiss Comments

this was great and very strong as a kiss u might say , thank you for the read

with one kiss u set me free...........i know how that feels

Wow! this one got me thinking - I love the different emotions at work here, it's like the beginning of a fantastic ballad - kind of like what Sleeping Beauty might sing to the prince? I'd love to see how it ends.

Is life on Earth the fiery pit? I like this one quick and simple.

ah...this is just simply beautiful...wow...amazing poem.

ja! that is how it is sometimes it makes to see things you thought were impossible possible.

I want to feel free again... feeling the slavery of be in love... I mean, I want a kiss... thanks for sharing!