With Arrival Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

With Arrival



Look at flower
And offer
Little smile
In your style

The petals shall be shaken
To show it has taken
Your message
With full seasonal change

Feel free to describe
In the way you like
You shall be delighted
With words to be delighted

You are lover of beauty
And also follower of almighty
You may find real fragrance
If you receive smile in advance

It is natural
With arrival
Of beautiful flowers
From rainy showers

Sunday, November 9, 2014
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 November 2014

Look at flower And offer

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 November 2014

Good flow Harry Husane13 hours ago It was a ok read. Don't know much about poetry myself but I didn't feel like that there was anything meaningful behind it personally, however, your writing skills are excellent.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 November 2014

Scott Ransopher likes this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome Just now · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 November 2014

Well Done Mr. Steve6 minutes ago Great beauty found with the small things in life

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 November 2014

Very delightful edgars prieditisLess than a minute ago Very delightful vibes. I did not fully get the stuff about With full seasonal change and You may find real fragrance If you receive smile in advance, but that may be because english is not my native language so I won't take away points for that. Good luck! Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 November 2014

ok Clyde Land7 minutes ago ok

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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